Once our proposals were shared with our tutor, she gave us some feedback. She told us that some of our ideas were 'too dramatic' and so, we need to make them more realistic. This was especially in proposal two, where she said that the couple should not meet again with one as a homeless man, as this is just too unrealistic. We are thinking of changing this so that the two have a summer romance and meet again in a more 'natural' setting, and it could be more focused on the two trying to get together as one does not accept their sexuality.
Our first proposal was okay, however, we will ensure that most of the film would be focused on the couple other than the males sister, thus meaning the montage in the trailer would show the two getting over the death and building up their relationship.
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